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run dmk | 0 | 0% | |
halob | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-17-04, 04:48 PM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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halob vs rundmk
IP: CBBC D27E
10-12lines
do by 7clock hater vote
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i just mit murk u next |
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02-17-04, 05:04 PM | #2 |
New to RB
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IP: 33AE A446
if u my dog let me hear u bark it aint my fault that the thought that hit u hard split u apart, shouldve kept your guard, trying 2 play hard, last night u pulled up wit a black car in the yard, rapping on a hard rock u want to murder me u got the wrong consperecy, listen b jelousy will get u no where when gurlz see u they say u a bitch.. u betteR I DREAM A GENY
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02-17-04, 05:05 PM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CBBC D27E
u need to set down before u get shred in to pieces/
but before i'l spit i'l put him under my teleconies/ these dud is ready to get shreded/ at least i give him a littlebit credit/ you think this is for fun well my rhymes are no joke/ by the tyme im done i'll be looking at a frog about to croke/ i am just like a reaper just ready to kill/ my wicked rhymes is just like your guts just ready to spill/ this dud lyricaly insain but yet i shows no pain/ so this ***** better stop frunten and get of the gansta train/
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i just mit murk u next |
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02-17-04, 05:53 PM | #4 | |
Half Lyricist/Half King
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IP: C1DA C961
haha nice last 4 lines HaloB for a newb
Punches and Personals-HaloB took this easily cause it was hard to read rundmk's verse and HaloB had some nice last 4 lines for a newb, no personals at all, elevate on that Structure and flow-HaloB, cause rundmk's structure and flow was fucked up really bad and it needs help go to wackness emergency center for details on that dawg Multis and Wordplay-Maybe one attempt at both by HaloB, but that's it, both need to elevate in these categories.......... Conclusion-HaloB took this wit a simple verse and both need to elevate alot!!!!!!! Before thinking they can have higher competetion, iight Vote-HaloB
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03-07-04, 11:06 AM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CBBC D27E
uppin 1x vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote
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i just mit murk u next |
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03-07-04, 11:12 AM | #6 |
Flyweight
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IP: 4577 CD9A
yo ahlob got this
better struvture better rhymes better ounchlines and alright vocabulay really no multis yo runddmk, you need to work on getting a better strcture and having equal syllables on each line. vote-halob
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03-07-04, 03:21 PM | #7 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CBBC D27E
uppin 2x vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote
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i just mit murk u next |
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03-07-04, 06:16 PM | #8 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A23B D5BB
Yea That Was A Quick Battle Rundmk You Barely A Rapper.
Yo Halob It Sounded Better Off Da Tongue And The Last Line In Ya Verse Ended His Pathetic Try . Dmk Why You On Here Get Ya Skills Up 1 |
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03-23-04, 07:46 PM | #9 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CBBC D27E
hey uppin some votes come on vote vote vote vote vote
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i just mit murk u next |
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03-26-04, 11:11 PM | #10 | |
Under Oath
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IP: E034 DBC6
LOL nice halob that was betta than ur battle vs me kid but ima have to go wit you on dis one u rymed real well i liked the multi's n the line bout the gangsta train was kinda funny
Run dmk im sorry bro but i wasen't feelin yah one bit i think ya rap made no sence dog i aint haten to anything but evaluate....Mabe if you made it longer that woulah been nice 2 son |
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04-09-04, 10:36 AM | #11 | |
New to RB
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IP: D587 067B
i agree with skillz here and this goes to any one battling on RB no one has really impressed me yet ive seen almost no attempt to equall out the syllables of each line used.
but in the same respect ive been very impressed with the extended vocab that everyone tries to utalize The low down-this battle goes to halob his lyrics hit a lot harder his verse had more structure and he dominated this battle line for line Run dmk was beat both of you put up a good fight but this goes to Halob. return the favor hit up the battle Diablo-vice Versus Lokie im looking
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DIABLO-VICE Wins: Lokie respect list: Wildfire return the favor with an honest vote please these are my currently open battles http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118868 |
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04-09-04, 10:38 AM | #12 | |
New to RB
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IP: D587 067B
for some good honest feedback im kinda new to ONLINE battle bullshit theres just not enouph face to face battles in calgary canada
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DIABLO-VICE Wins: Lokie respect list: Wildfire return the favor with an honest vote please these are my currently open battles http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118868 |
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