pretty primitive, kinda basic man

Im not one to just say bad things but that "rhymes come naturally on the keyboard
any nigga wanna battle me, i suggest u take a detour" nice line liked that

but really you wanna keep it more structured so the syllables are close...loook how your rhyme is, its med...then long....then short, keep it closer thats all i can think of...

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