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02-24-04, 12:03 AM | #1 | |||||||
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first ever keystyle
IP: 909F E17F
it's gremlin, im terrorizing and analyizing
no room for nerds and their starship enterprising this for the real emcees the one's that be demolishing niggas, leaving debris rhymes come naturally on the keyboard any nigga wanna battle me, i suggest u take a detour cause you'll hit a dead end, with no where to go ill rip u apart, make ur rhymes seem like they written for bel biv devoe i be the extreme case of fire and anger every rhyme i spit is like sly stallone, a cliffhanger king gremlin bout to hit ur metropolis im so deadly, ill make 50 look like george popadapolis. let me know what u guys think.
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02-24-04, 07:35 AM | #2 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 0612 539A
pretty primitive, kinda basic man
Im not one to just say bad things but that "rhymes come naturally on the keyboard any nigga wanna battle me, i suggest u take a detour" nice line liked that but really you wanna keep it more structured so the syllables are close...loook how your rhyme is, its med...then long....then short, keep it closer thats all i can think of...
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02-24-04, 11:39 AM | #3 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: DB09 AF77
word. ill work on that
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02-26-04, 08:10 PM | #4 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 05EC F937
shit was hot boy that punch right there was kind of sick widd it anyway keep your wordplay in there and multis and metas it was kinda basic tho you prolly could of came harder
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02-27-04, 11:45 AM | #5 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 1795 802E
i like that cliffhanger ryme dog, and all the flow was tight.
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