New and not enough posts to vote yet, but here's some quick feedback.

JDC sacrificed some smoothness and clarity to work in the extra multi's. I often make that mistake myself. It's true that something like:

calm down you lower than you think, u dispicable**
6 foot under, far below the kitchen sink, to literal-->**
<--ly dont spit u shit out ya mouth like epilectic~shock**
you the "flamin" homosexual lovin the "pyrotechnic"~cock**

...is packed with internal rhymes and all that, but it's dang hard to follow. It sounds a little forced. Same deal with "saddam hits hispanics" -- it's a cool multi, but I have no idea what it means, unless you're making some kind of oblique reference to there being a lot of minorities in the US military or something like that. In a battle rap it just seems weird and out of place. So: high marks for rhyme scheme, but the rhymes came at the expense of other elements.

VanGo came with some standard "you're gay and yo' mama's an ugly ho" disses which don't interest me much. Okay, the mama diss was kinda funny, so maybe a point for that. His rhyming was good, his stuff flowed pretty well and was easy to follow. The shots against Canada were okay. A solid battle verse but no really inspired content IMO.

I dunno -- if I were voting I'd give the nod to VanGo. Both y'all had your strong points though.