heres the rules

16 line max
5 votes win
3-0 KO
no flippin, crew votes, hater votes.. etc...

post verse b4 friday 7pm..

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"VanGo", just jump in your "Van" and just~"Go"**
damn hoe, u think anyone wants ya around fuck~no**
just get out.. like all the women in your life tell~u~too**
its not ur fault your faulty so comon just mell~o~dude**
calm down you lower than you think, u dispicable**
6 foot under, far below the kitchen sink, to literal-->**
<--ly dont spit u shit out ya mouth like epilectic~shock**
you the "flamin" homosexual lovin the "pyrotechnic"~cock**
your fires out, diminished, ur sunk like bottom~less~titanic**
with no doubt, ur finished, blown away like saddam~hits~hispanics**

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by the way "**" means end of line..

ok when votes comin in.. must vote on

multiez -
flow -
personalz -
complexity -
style -

this is explainin the votes

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If Thats The Best You Got, Theyre Aint No Way You Can Stop Me/ I Suggest You Put Down The Mic And Continue Playing Hockey/ They Call You Jdc, Is That For Just Digging Cocks/ You Couldnt Tower Over Me If I Gave You Building Blocks/ Canadas Got Hip Hop? I Suppose You Speak French/ Im A Four Year Starter Kid, Your Catchin Splinters On The Bench/ Your A Closet Mc, Who Shouldve Stayed In The Closet/ You Think Your Rhymes Are Tight But Your Leaking Like A Faucet/ Its Vango Tearin Up Ontario, Plus I Rep Naptown When Im Putting The Smack Down/ You Want Punches, Let Me Hit You With A Jab/ You Think Your Catchin Wreck, Man You Couldnt Catch A Cab/ Better Yet Motherfucker, How Bout An Uppercut/ Your Mamas So Damn Ugly She Puts Makeup On Her Butt/ Im From The Usa, So I Bleed Red White And Blue, Fuck Ontario Canada And Fuck You Tooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo can we get some votes, uppin for votes yall!!!!!!!!!!!!!

New and not enough posts to vote yet, but here's some quick feedback.

JDC sacrificed some smoothness and clarity to work in the extra multi's. I often make that mistake myself. It's true that something like:

calm down you lower than you think, u dispicable**
6 foot under, far below the kitchen sink, to literal-->**
<--ly dont spit u shit out ya mouth like epilectic~shock**
you the "flamin" homosexual lovin the "pyrotechnic"~cock**

...is packed with internal rhymes and all that, but it's dang hard to follow. It sounds a little forced. Same deal with "saddam hits hispanics" -- it's a cool multi, but I have no idea what it means, unless you're making some kind of oblique reference to there being a lot of minorities in the US military or something like that. In a battle rap it just seems weird and out of place. So: high marks for rhyme scheme, but the rhymes came at the expense of other elements.

VanGo came with some standard "you're gay and yo' mama's an ugly ho" disses which don't interest me much. Okay, the mama diss was kinda funny, so maybe a point for that. His rhyming was good, his stuff flowed pretty well and was easy to follow. The shots against Canada were okay. A solid battle verse but no really inspired content IMO.

I dunno -- if I were voting I'd give the nod to VanGo. Both y'all had your strong points though.

yo get some posts so you can vote on some battles kid, nobody votes on shit around here.

Vango

Uppin People!

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yo uppin for votes, yo cmon people

upppinnn for votes yall.............................................. ..................................