Im not dickriding but yeah I think sniper won. Yours (Chalk) lacked substances and wasnt long enough for me, I liked the war references. A bit more practice would be good for you I'd say but a GREAT start. Also try to make your rhymes easier to read.


Good work on both accounts, but Im voting Snipes.

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