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Old 03-13-04, 10:51 AM   #31
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Clorox............you need to elevate some..........work on extended you bars so that you punches will hit harder, and also work on your verse structure..........if you do that, then rest will follow................

Snyper..........your verse was nice..........just don't overdue the punches vs. wordplay to much............it makes the verse a lil choppy.............

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