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Old 03-29-04, 08:51 PM   #9
Red Dogg420
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lemme break it down

Triple_N, u got tha punchlines aced no doubt, and nice structure to, vocab was pretty good, and fa sho u reppin 420 hard, even busted out tha word is bond i like that

Piece, u was pretty good yo last line was great, ur structure was pretty good to, but u need to work on vocab, no hard feelings but N flowed beter

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