Post The Rules Playa And Lets Get Started

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ah'ight ma 10-15 line spits
crew votes allowed
but no dick ridin'
nothin personal
you spit first

Alright Boi' .. Droppin!!

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This Is The Lesson, Have A Coke and a "Smile",/
This Is FreeStyle Mutha-Fucka, You Know That Your In Denial,/
Why Don't You Sit There A While, Man And Try To Complile,/
You A Child Of "Date-Rape", Your Old Mans A Pedophile,/
Your A Minute Steak SweeTheart, Thats All It Takes,/
For Me To Cook Your Ass And Expose You As A Fake,/
Dont Make The Mistake, Faggot When Im In The Place,/
I Know You Take Cum Shots Directly Straight In The Face,/
C'Mon Hit Me Back, Ill Wait For Your Attack,/
Then Ill Slap You Back, And Tell That You Are Extremely Whack,/
Your Silent Mimes & Thes Rhymes, Look Like Your Performin "Retard-Mockery",/
Between This You Can "Xerox" Ya 'Penis' And Still Not Cum Up With A "Rock-Hard-Copy",/

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ah'ight ma' I felt that, u droppin' some shit you are spittin' your ass off ah'ight I'm droppin'

A'right Playa Get This Shit Heated

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Lol Playa Dont Take.. All Day'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Yo, have y'all seen this bitch pic, her face is shit/
I wouldn't even let her suck my dog's dick/
Word is bond, shawtie got some big ass lips/
I bet she food stuck in between'em/
fuck teeth, this bitch don't even need'em/
Her head is big and her body all small/
I'll saw 2 holes in her dome, and make her Disaster the biracial bowlin' ball/
Disaster your just to sick for me, you's a hoe/
You got every type of STD, you got VD, AIDS, The Clap, and herpes/
You's a death sentence, you wasn't lyin' when u said u'd murk me/
I mean your whole Gene pool is fucked up/
If you have one attractive feature you lucked up/
C'mon bitch all you do is choke chickens/
Oh shit that was your verse u was spittin', I thought u was shittin'/
You rip me bitch! you gotta be kiddin', everything u spit was prewritten/


Hold that shawtie, I hope there's no hard feelings. Its just business you understand right.

lemme break it down

Triple_N, u got tha punchlines aced no doubt, and nice structure to, vocab was pretty good, and fa sho u reppin 420 hard, even busted out tha word is bond i like that

Piece, u was pretty good yo last line was great, ur structure was pretty good to, but u need to work on vocab, no hard feelings but N flowed beter

vote-Triple_N

Yo this battle clearly go to Triple_N aint no problem he straight ripped it my vote is Triple_N

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Safe Playa No Hard Feelings lol

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Well Fuck You PLAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lmfao Just'Messin Is Cool' No Disrespect Taken!!

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i think DP came a lil betta wit tha flo and structure
close battle tho....very close...no d/r jus facts
YA'll both spit good..good battle
vote-DP
go vote http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...734#post1214734

i think DP came a lil betta wit tha flo and structure
close battle tho....very close...no d/r jus facts
YA'll both spit good..good battle
vote-DP
go vote http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...734#post1214734

Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votes..............................

Thanx For The Vote!! Appriciate It!!

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