good work ma. that shit was straight. im gonna have to agree with a few of the other suggestions mentioned above. as willa said, you need to play around with your vocab a little bit more and work on some multies...but besides that, your coming along alot smoother. your improving star. keep it up. one.

s.v...............c.s.

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