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Old 03-31-04, 01:56 AM   #21
Afterword
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yo E got lyrics,
but dope emcee had a nice flow going
it wuz pretty dope, just need some hotter "words" =vocab
ima go with E b/c he had the all around better verse for this battle
better word choice, harder punches
dope no h8 just keep workin
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