10-15 lines
Just don't cheat.........
Due asap (under 20 mins)

~Good Luck~

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Check in and start keyin.............

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I ain't startin until you check in...................

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Alright...........I gotta go............I asked a mod to close this battle.........if you wanna extend the deadline until sometime tomorrow just let me know.

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yeah, yo, sorry about that....my computers fuckin' up... log on tomarrow in the morning about 9:30 gmt (general mountain time)....see you then...

-dope_emcee

I'll just drop when I get a chance................

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Time to show the newb whats up..........

Dope Emcee, hmmmm.......... He's got the Dope Part Right//
A virgin to RB's the only way this pussy's So Darn Tight//
If you so dope then where's the Kane, or are you just Often Abel//
Must get ya dope lines from my rhymes or Off The Table//
Cannibal Flows....... crack ya skull, Dismantle Ya Toes//
This dude ain't shook, I'm savin his jaw, got his Mandible Froze//
Yo Slim, you ain't bright you Shady, Go 'Gainst Me//
If he was lookin for mediocre rappers, you still wouln't be what a Dope Em See//
He'll probably go to tutorials, catch him Postin For Help//
He ain't even got enough posts for him to Vote For Himself//
I'll Burn This Guy, leave him lyrically Murderized//
Manslaughter?.........I'l probably get convicted for HERBicide//

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aight, aight...your was good. here's mine.


you steppin' on stage like your somethin'//
naw, dog, the truth is you ain't really nothin'//
quit frontin'//
ah, fuck it//
you can take this mutherfuckin' mic and shove it//
yeah, we all know you'd love it, like your beloved//
like the rest of those dildos you got up there//
i'm tellin' you, you best not mess wit me when i'm buzzin'//
yeah, fuck dirty dozen//
'cause all i need is one round and you be done then//
gutted like a fuckin' pumpkin'//
it only takes one sin to become wanted//
like a criminal that eats suckas like you, and i'm just munchin'//
i say you ain't nothin' but a munchkin//
i don't give a fuck if you win this battle, so what then?

ok, ok, Lets get some votes on this...................

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neither of you are using personals, just a bunch of played out punches, but i have to go with emcee, his is the only one that didnt sound retarded, both of you need help on structure, flow, openers, closers, multies, and personals, but emcee gets my vote

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

hit this up

ok....let's get some more votes peeps....

enigma:..honestly i think that was a shytty vote from whoever that was up there. but anyway. enigma u a had a good opener. few punchlines werent hittin but was good. i like this line. Dope Emcee, hmmmm.......... He's got the Dope Part Right//
A virgin to RB's the only way this pussy's So Darn Tight//
and u had a few multies.

emcee: uh not really dope like your name says. cuz your vocab doesnt take up for your name. this wasnt dope at all. something my 10 yr old brother could make up. and i wasnt feelin none of your punchlines. flow u need to work on. plus structure elevate man if u want to be competitive

v/enygma

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B.P.

^^^Word to what DaClassic said. This battle was sad...nothin' stood out in either verse...but fuck it, somebody has to win, and the winner is enygma for betetr punches and multies...Dope Emcee...elevate a lot...

Vote- Enygma

Hit these up...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117367

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Thanks for the votes.............uppin for more

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