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Old 04-08-04, 06:36 PM   #11
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Nah, You See That's The Problem....You See All Those Fake Emcees Over At Original Rb.com Spitting Wack Shit..

Check Dis..

ILLunatic: 6/10
Flow Was Nice and Structure Was DeCent, Smiles Are Just Childish So Loose Them. Punches Were Nice But Not As Hard As I Expected From You. Word Usage and Vocab Is Beyond Elementry, Didn't See Too Many Multis nor Metaphors. Still Nice Drop, Keep Elevating, and Stay Dope.

Lyrical MC: 7/10
Your Vocab and Word Usuage Blows My Mind Away Everytime I See You Spit. Sumtimes It Even Confuses Me Haha...Which Is Kinda Embarrassing Since Your 2 Years Younger Den Me. Mulits and Metaphors Were Sick. Punches Were Nice But Like ILL"s Not What I Expected. Neways...Nice Overall Drop and Stay Dope Pimpin. Keep Elevating.

Vote - Lyrical

Best Lines of Both:

.::Illunatic::.

"Why you even try battling? your rhymes make zero sense
Its so hard to understand them, you keep readers aggrivated in suspense/"

.::Lyrical Mc's::.

"ILLunatic Vet Still Hides His Rec Bow Ur Head In Shame,
His Wackness Neva To Subside As He Hit Sub Zero Fame,"

~R~