10 Lines
you drop first
No Feeding
No Biteing
No Recycling
No crew votes
No hate votes
No d/r votes


Good luck kid

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aiight checkin in....good luck dawg...ima drop first

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ILLunatic Heblaly Srayin' Dramtick Like He Was Graffit,
His Verble Dusty As I Spread His Ashes Like Conffti,
This Kid Couldn't Bust A Verble Shot To Penertrate,
Shouldn't D/R Herb Coz This Reported To Investagate,
ILLunatic Vet Still Hides His Rec Bow Ur Head In Shame,
His Wackness Neva To Subside As He Hit Sub Zero Fame,
Your Mic Cred Is At Small Migority Invesible To Naked Eye,
Get Physical Coz If Your Rhyme Had Wings They Still Not Fly,
Come Off Dawg You Aint No Verterain Battle Rapper,
Your Visoin Fogg You Can't See Ur Rhyme Dress Slapper,

Blah...

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Lyrical MC........ one of Rapbattles Relaunched Finest?
Its a known joke, he's wack, theres no way to hide this
He's callin out vets, i was mistaken, i thought he had skill
Readin his previous battles i , cuz i can't stand still
I should just quit now, i done sonned you with just 4 lines
But oh well, i guess after this one.. i can sonn you another 4 times
Why you even try battling? your rhymes make zero sense
Its so hard to understand them, you keep readers aggrivated in suspense
Fuck it.. i'll stop now, and just say it... i got to express Lyrical MC, truley
Haha...... they made a smiley that should be your avy! ya newbie

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Blah.. i didn't even try
And yo, whats up with that
Capitalizing Every First Letter In Every Word?
That style went out about a year ago...

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Punches: Gotta give the edge to lyrical even though some of his rhymes kinda missed. He had a couple pretty nice punches in there, Ill didn't really have anything stand out.

Flow: I thought it wasn't great on either, if you actually read the lines they just don't flow well together, slight edge to Ill on this one.

Other: Defintely Lyrical on this one, with the originality and the crazy rhymes.. ILL's smiley attack just doesn't do it for me...

Vote: Lyrical.

Honest votes on these:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118554
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1224680

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

uppin...

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What the fuck?
Dick riding i see...
... *shakes head*

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ILLunatic - good battle, had some nice flow and some good punches.

Best Line: Why you even try battling? your rhymes make zero sense
Its so hard to understand them, you keep readers aggrivated in suspense

Worst Line: I should just quit now, i done sonned you with just 4 lines
But oh well, i guess after this one.. i can sonn you another 4 times

Lyrical MC - good battle also, like your flow and punches as well.. good job.

Best Line: Your Mic Cred Is At Small Migority Invesible To Naked Eye,
Get Physical Coz If Your Rhyme Had Wings They Still Not Fly

Worst Line: NONE

OVERALL - I ogtta give this to Lyrical, becuase I was just feelin his more, he had better flow and better punches, ILL you shit was good also, just was feelin his more, step up on the punches and multi's next time and you will take em.

VOTE - Lyrical

yo hit this up plz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118148 I was alrdy at 4 votes and now down to one.. lol, hit this up and get it over wit.. explain your vote.

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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two...
The

TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

wtf? RB Relaunched groupies!
I swear to god... if this was in Original RB
Lyrical would be gettin laughed at!

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Nah, You See That's The Problem....You See All Those Fake Emcees Over At Original Rb.com Spitting Wack Shit..

Check Dis..

ILLunatic: 6/10
Flow Was Nice and Structure Was DeCent, Smiles Are Just Childish So Loose Them. Punches Were Nice But Not As Hard As I Expected From You. Word Usage and Vocab Is Beyond Elementry, Didn't See Too Many Multis nor Metaphors. Still Nice Drop, Keep Elevating, and Stay Dope.

Lyrical MC: 7/10
Your Vocab and Word Usuage Blows My Mind Away Everytime I See You Spit. Sumtimes It Even Confuses Me Haha...Which Is Kinda Embarrassing Since Your 2 Years Younger Den Me. Mulits and Metaphors Were Sick. Punches Were Nice But Like ILL"s Not What I Expected. Neways...Nice Overall Drop and Stay Dope Pimpin. Keep Elevating.

Vote - Lyrical

Best Lines of Both:

.::Illunatic::.

"Why you even try battling? your rhymes make zero sense
Its so hard to understand them, you keep readers aggrivated in suspense/"

.::Lyrical Mc's::.

"ILLunatic Vet Still Hides His Rec Bow Ur Head In Shame,
His Wackness Neva To Subside As He Hit Sub Zero Fame,"

~R~

Not a bad battle

Illunatic came with some nice lines
Why you even try battling? your rhymes make zero sense
Its so hard to understand them, you keep readers aggrivated in suspense
Fuck it.. i'll stop now, and just say it... i got to express Lyrical MC, truley
Haha...... they made a smiley that should be your avy! ya newbie

Lyrical came decent too

Come Off Dawg You Aint No Verterain Battle Rapper,
Your Visoin Fogg You Can't See Ur Rhyme Dress Slapper,

Basically Ill wins with a bit more quotable from his verse.

You both need to work on coming with some wittier wordplay however

uppin'

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uppin 2

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