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Old 04-08-04, 11:08 PM   #12
Adebisi
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Not a bad battle

Illunatic came with some nice lines
Why you even try battling? your rhymes make zero sense
Its so hard to understand them, you keep readers aggrivated in suspense
Fuck it.. i'll stop now, and just say it... i got to express Lyrical MC, truley
Haha...... they made a smiley that should be your avy! ya newbie

Lyrical came decent too

Come Off Dawg You Aint No Verterain Battle Rapper,
Your Visoin Fogg You Can't See Ur Rhyme Dress Slapper,

Basically Ill wins with a bit more quotable from his verse.

You both need to work on coming with some wittier wordplay however