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Old 04-09-04, 04:56 PM   #20
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countree got this easily, both of you had decent structure. Nope....i honestly didn't like your verse. No disrespect, but your punches wern't there, you hardly had any metaphors, you didn't have any multies and no personals. Countree, you had personals(not that strong) but they were there, you had multies, a few of the multies i really liked. i don't remember being metaphors, but there could of been. All in all, countree got it easy, but i am pretty confident you both could do better...no disrespect tho cause thats how it works. Much love and respect to everybody
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