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Old 04-10-04, 11:52 AM   #2
Concrete
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Ill starting line

I don't smoke weed but im still dope\

NIIICEEE

Rhyme wasn't bad or good, it was mediocre I guess, had nice lines here and there, also like the population line

A little more vocabulary can help, sort of lacked in that catergory, and multies would intercede greatly, too. Keep trying to perfect perfection(lol)

Keep elevating, bro, I could see you got the right potential for more talent......

Keep dropping and elevating, and keep ya head up
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