New to RB
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IP:
Ill starting line
I don't smoke weed but im still dope\
NIIICEEE
Rhyme wasn't bad or good, it was mediocre I guess, had nice lines here and there, also like the population line
A little more vocabulary can help, sort of lacked in that catergory, and multies would intercede greatly, too. Keep trying to perfect perfection(lol)
Keep elevating, bro, I could see you got the right potential for more talent......
Keep dropping and elevating, and keep ya head up
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Lyrical Crooks:fuck wit us, ya get shook up an book up in tha I.C.U.
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