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04-10-04, 11:45 AM
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Dope Thoughts
IP: 7A52 73B1
yo
I don't smoke weed but im still dope\ but yet my rhymes come out like my blood cells were made of coke\ think im funny, blast u and put the kool-aid in yo face so u can be the joke\ fuck wit me, to make sure u know it, i'll put yo name in quotes\ the only way u will touch me is if u will write da same shit that i wrote\ I spit so much acid that i have a steel mic, so it can only get soaked\ if i was a drug yall be fightin just to get the next toke\ blame these wak rappers cause im the ill beast they have awoke\ like putting an egg in da microwave i bust like the yolk\ dog yall fuckin wit CHEKMATE\ i'll brake the chain that connects the frame so i can let loose wit no fame\ look who yall goin against cause yall playin the chess game\ i'll go and lower the population in yo state\ i bust like if i was da 44 ''M''\ im so dope it's like if they stash weed in my head\ dog i'll have u layin in yo 6 feet below zero bed\ yall last name should be willice cause yall get bruce'd\ tryin to get rid of me off this website, thers is wak rappers to choose\ as soon as i touch this keyboard or mic i let loose\ dont touch my hotness will burn off all your juice\ chi-town 26 street where murder is always in da news. |
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04-10-04, 11:52 AM
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IP: 7938 1200
Ill starting line
I don't smoke weed but im still dope\ NIIICEEE Rhyme wasn't bad or good, it was mediocre I guess, had nice lines here and there, also like the population line A little more vocabulary can help, sort of lacked in that catergory, and multies would intercede greatly, too. Keep trying to perfect perfection(lol) Keep elevating, bro, I could see you got the right potential for more talent...... Keep dropping and elevating, and keep ya head up
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Battle Record 0-1 Wins- Losses-Kingz KOs- ~What goes around, comes around~ Lyrical Crooks:fuck wit us, ya get shook up an book up in tha I.C.U.  
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04-10-04, 12:02 PM
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IP: 7A52 73B1
thanx dog, anymore shit.
I spit what i live, i live what i spit, i spit real shit. |
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04-10-04, 12:05 PM
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IP: 7A52 73B1
that was some ill shit.
especially this line "im so dope its like they stash weed in my head" that was an ill line. keep it up dawg. peace out Flatlinaz is keepin it ill. |
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04-10-04, 12:12 PM
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IP: 7A52 73B1
Thanx Demo,
Anyone Else Got Some Feedback? Yall Bettah Watch Out, Flatlinaz Iz Comin. I Spit What I Live, I Live What I Spit, I Spit Real Shit |
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