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Old 04-10-04, 02:44 PM   #23
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Im'a "r.i.p." this kid like his crew is stated ...
only 1 of the ppl from your crew is underrated....
Not really a good opener...
the rest of yall might as well fall off and stop tryin to rhyme...
cause puttin up a newb to battle you is a "waste of his time"...
You kinda helped him out wit that line...
i looked back on some of your previous so called battles.....
you seem to got a swollen head thinkin that you can "keystyle"...
bitch it seemed half ya shyt was "written" learn how to "Freestyle"...
Not really a punch...
Fuck Da R.I.P. I go solo....
Fuck yall you cant rhyme like me i got mad "flow"...
Once again, where's the punch?
Any one of yall who want to step to me bring it i got that new/old school flavor...
i got the rhymes that you worship call me ya new found "savior"....
Could have been worded better
"Da R.I.P." is weak and countreeJay is theyre problem...
on a list of worst newbs hes on the "BOTTOm"...
Not a bad closer...


You know, i'm CounTREE, so like the old west, I could make you famous,/
So when you come at the greatest they'll all remember what your name is./
Ehh....needs to be reworded...
It's nope, cause you can't cope that my style strictly sounds dope./
And the shit you wrote got your takin' career here swiftly downslope./
Not bad...
I know it's hard to believe that you were even concieved,/
But your momz secret garden, I planted that seed./
Ok, but kinda played...
To bad you didn't get none of your daddy's good skillz./
Now you can never use this mc thing to pay the billz./
Ok, you kinda turned it on him a bit...
I shoulda said that's not mine in the begging and neva had contact again,/
I always said i'd disown my son if he grew up to like men./
Gettin better...
So now i'll be like everyone else, cause nigga i don't know you./
But if you still wanna know how to be an mc, nigga let me show you./
Not a great closer, but it'll do...

Overall this was an ok battle. They were almost evenly matched, but I think Countree had a little bit more experience and it showed in his punches and flow. Could use some work on his wordplay and metas. Nope seemed to have a hard time even throwin a punch. Most of his shit wasn't even directed toward his opponent. He lacked wordplay and metas as well. I gotta give this one to Countree cause he obviously spit the better verse....

Vote: CountreeJay
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