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New to RB
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lmfao omfg this battle so lope sided I just want to drop a inadiquat reply haha
Creativity - Choppah
Flow/structure - Choppah
Punch's - choppah
personal's - neither really
multi's - choppah
metah's - shady
Shady the only reason u got meta's is cause u actually had picturing guns and shit but man u had nothing no gas where's ur battling techneque don't tell me that's it or ur going to get ownt pal elevate
Fav line: are u kidding me
Worst line: the whole thing basically
No hate shady work on ur structure maybe take a look, and vote on some battle's before u do it helps read a book listen to some battles I dunno u need a merical witht hat structure lol.
Choppah much better flower obviously lol. I don't really feel the need to crit ur verse cause any1 could rip this kid drop me a next link to 1 of ur better battles, and you'll get the crit u want.
Fav line - i dont kno if im wasteing a verse or my time......
if these punk nigga a genuis,then im way past enstine........
^dope line very creative
worst line - none
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