aight i'll go first since you insist.

Last battle i spit wasn't hard enough i guess, so fuck it:

Diamonds shining//Nine in the lining//Once i bring it out, these nigga starts the whining//starts the crying//cuz he treasures his life and//he wants to go home to his wife and//in this gunfight all he brought was a knife man..//Aint that a pity//damn it's quite shitty//but now i'm a chop this cocksucka into a million pieces//and scatter his parts all over the city//You battling me is a crime//my first loss was a fluke, i'm not losing this time//flow remiscant to gotti in his prime//the nerve of this coward battling me//the meanest mc//to hold a nine and empty//three in to a punk ass mc..//with this mic dog i'll pop ya//hit you off something proper//My flow so sharp it'll chop ya//after this they gonna nick name me the choppa stoppa//I spit so they call me rude//but they dont know that i'll turn your birthday suit// into a three piece suit// when i spit three into you dude//check my legal record, the last guy i battled sued//this battle rap shit just aint for you//only battle you got a good chance of winning is a family fued//lyrics straight stripping you nude//man you knew you was coming to lose//after this my advise to you is to just abuse the booze//and reminisce on how you almost made the news//as the first online rapper to break his C.P.U.//

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shad·y
adj. shad·i·er, shad·i·est
1. Full of shade; shaded.
2. Casting shade: a shady grove.
3. Quiet, dark, or concealed; hidden.
4. Of dubious character or honesty; questionable. See Synonyms at dark

OMG this nigga sound like shady on crack.....
i dont even wanna spit back 2 his verse it was so wack.....
nigga please u not hero,spider wouldnet even attmept 2 help u.....
the wackest MC on da site is defintly wat they should belt u.....
got on and dis nigga da 1 that smotthed up??
u can walk in SHADY shoes and still get SLIM and booed up......
i dont kno if im wasteing a verse or my time......
if these punk nigga a genuis,then im way past enstine........
how u expect 2 win wit rhymes like "u cant touch dis".....
im laughing at yo verse,is dat all u came wit.......
u cant be serious,congrats my easiest challenger......
im laughing so hard,i dont even kno y i battled ya.....
u should be banned,4 the eastiest MC......
and wack username,from wack slim shady......
damnn homie u betta off tryin 2 fly.......
cuz i killed yo slim ass and i didnt even try.........

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uppin 4 votes 2 easyy..................................LOL

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uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ...........

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shad·y
adj. shad·i·er, shad·i·est
1. Full of shade; shaded.
2. Casting shade: a shady grove.
3. Quiet, dark, or concealed; hidden.
4. Of dubious character or honesty; questionable. See Synonyms at dark

lmfao omfg this battle so lope sided I just want to drop a inadiquat reply haha

Creativity - Choppah
Flow/structure - Choppah
Punch's - choppah
personal's - neither really
multi's - choppah
metah's - shady

Shady the only reason u got meta's is cause u actually had picturing guns and shit but man u had nothing no gas where's ur battling techneque don't tell me that's it or ur going to get ownt pal elevate

Fav line: are u kidding me
Worst line: the whole thing basically

No hate shady work on ur structure maybe take a look, and vote on some battle's before u do it helps read a book listen to some battles I dunno u need a merical witht hat structure lol.

Choppah much better flower obviously lol. I don't really feel the need to crit ur verse cause any1 could rip this kid drop me a next link to 1 of ur better battles, and you'll get the crit u want.

Fav line - i dont kno if im wasteing a verse or my time......
if these punk nigga a genuis,then im way past enstine........

^dope line very creative

worst line - none

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lol forgot to drop the link to my battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118516

^yung duke vs me

and I have another 1 it's lokie vs Aero can u guys vote on that 1 plz it needs to get closed thx

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^My crew bringing the heat 24/7

Soundclick Page

^Currently hosting 2 Freestyles, and 1 Writin

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Man choppa tell these niggas stop wastein they time typin all this bullshit wen they know they not gon win.....but i dunno....my money on choppa

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it was a pretty close battle but choppper city won

wow at first shady you were doing it up a lil something but your structure was fucked and you kept going all over the place no clear punches some decent multis but that is about it
shady-3/10

choppa ok obvisoly you didnt care to much but you came with what was nessacary to win this still need to up the vocab and multis but other than that decent flow
choppa-5/10

i'll vote if y'all do http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118359
this ain't my battle but my dawg is uppin for votes.
we remember if you vote for us and we return the favor.
holla at it and i'll holla back

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Aight Check It..

Shady_Genius: 2/10
More Of A Song Style You Have, Your A Newb In All, Just Elevate. Metaphors, Mulits, Word Usuage, Vocab, Personals/Punches, all you lacked. Just Elevate.

Choppa-City: 5/10
Sum Nice Punches, and Your Flow Was Nice. Liked The Line About Enstien and Shit. I Also Liked The Line About Walkin In Shady's Shoes, Could Be Slim....and Shit Like That. It Was Tight. Just Elevate On Mulits and Metaphors. Keep Dope.

Vote - Choppa

~R~

choppa won no dout tha lyric was hot the form of statment he dicussed was hot an how flow was illmatic..Shady.G boi need to up in yah game dat shyte was no contest u put up a good battle ..but my vote on choppa-city