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Old 04-12-04, 12:30 PM   #13
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check It..

Shady_Genius: 2/10
More Of A Song Style You Have, Your A Newb In All, Just Elevate. Metaphors, Mulits, Word Usuage, Vocab, Personals/Punches, all you lacked. Just Elevate.

Choppa-City: 5/10
Sum Nice Punches, and Your Flow Was Nice. Liked The Line About Enstien and Shit. I Also Liked The Line About Walkin In Shady's Shoes, Could Be Slim....and Shit Like That. It Was Tight. Just Elevate On Mulits and Metaphors. Keep Dope.

Vote - Choppa

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