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Old 04-13-04, 08:17 PM   #12
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KcrackMittens' Your Shit Was All Over The Place' Lost Me In A Couple Spots' .. And Most Of Your Lines Didn't Rhyme Worth Shit!! .. Sorry But Imma Have To Give It To LostRhyMes' ..

CheCck TheSe LinEs For a GoOd PuNch:

I 'grind canvases' just to prove that i'll 'pound your frame'...
cause your careers like removin' sink strainers the way its...down the drain...

^^Nice Punch Right There' ... 9/10

But You Both Could Work On All Category's.... Punches/Multies/Creativity/ Structure/ Flow/Vocab/Wordplay.. & Etc;
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