other than that obnoxiously annoying substitution of "5" for "s" and similiar, yaz that was a tight verse. i like the way you kept it fairly simple, but still hit pretty hard. nice flow, decent punches and nice wordlplay (peaches n cream, for example).

CREAM, your flow was messed up in places, going from very long lines to very short and back. also, some of your bars were just whack:

"my phenomenal flow is abomenal/
im big wit da lyrics like the snowman who's abomenal/"

rhyming a word with itself? and it makes no sense... abomindable snowman, abomenal is not a word. also, the punch is weak, and its like you bent over backwards to get the snowman in there... fucked up your flow and all.

elevate man.

v/ yaz.

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