u spit first...12 barz max..

[checkin in]

hey man check out my battle vs. phat mic, ill hit this up when im done (its in my sig)

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

upin for Yaz ta spit first

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This should be a good battle. I'll make sure to do an honest vote if you do too.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118732
Peace.

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"For Those Who Don't Know"

iight yo ima be droppin in the nex half hour iight

eh yo
tell me waz a dawg doin... 5traien thyz far alone
let me throw ya a bone an 5en ya on ya way home
kalm your hormonez, with petafile delusions
my konklu5ionz, intrution, juz ta 5et ya konfu5ionz
nikka... im the type ta mold ya like pla5ta¢ein
rip out yo 5plean, given new meenin ta pea¢hez an kream
fuk the gatz, money an 5ex... the vilen¢e an murder
kuz i da type ta uz ma 5oul ta take da flow further
dun uz ya gang bangin ride, take pride with upperea$t$ide
kume alive, an deprive the the livez of we5t kind

ok blood i see u

im here ta change faces,and ta make u change places..dont trip/
i'll leave u strech'd out inya hood wit blood leakin in front of crips/
Yaz iz azz,why he spittin on rb/
he betta off singin..go try r&b/
ya took long enuff to reply..what u do write?/
put shells to ya left side so u can start thinkin right/
my phenomenal flow is abomenal/
im big wit da lyrics like the snowman who's abomenal/
ur vulnerable ta nice rhymes/
and ya flow is flat...like death when u lose ya life line/
u might shine if u had glow/
and u might get real pussy..if u stop fuckin a blowup ho/
yellin ¢k,0-3-1/
but i'll still put u in a coroner van in front of ya duns/

blahh..i aint feelin it...get da votes comen

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eh yo lez get 5ome votez up here in thyz motha fuka, iight

uppin for votes

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I g2g give this one to yaz

flow= Yaz, creams flow waz to basic
Punch = Yaz, creams had a few but still basic
multis= yaz,creams had none

well basicly cream, you gotta work on ur vocab, Your pretty good for a beginer so I could see you elevating..aight..so jst keep spittin...you'll get as good as us someday...

vote = Yaz

Eh yo lez get 5ome damn kountz in on thyz 5hyt....

eh yo hit thyz up with an hone5t vote an leave a link

other than that obnoxiously annoying substitution of "5" for "s" and similiar, yaz that was a tight verse. i like the way you kept it fairly simple, but still hit pretty hard. nice flow, decent punches and nice wordlplay (peaches n cream, for example).

CREAM, your flow was messed up in places, going from very long lines to very short and back. also, some of your bars were just whack:

"my phenomenal flow is abomenal/
im big wit da lyrics like the snowman who's abomenal/"

rhyming a word with itself? and it makes no sense... abomindable snowman, abomenal is not a word. also, the punch is weak, and its like you bent over backwards to get the snowman in there... fucked up your flow and all.

elevate man.

v/ yaz.

hit back on the battles in my sig. honest votes only, good feedback only.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

eh yo letz get 5ome more votez up in thyz motha fuka iight?