alright, both of your verses had some really nice lines and a lot of whack filler crap.

"you give me 30 minutes to spit,i leave you with 30 years to regret/
come to nyc an leave ya spine disconnected, like cheap internet/ "

nice. good opener to intro the battle, pretty nice punch and then a decent line.

"when ya brains come out ya mouth you probally think before u talk/
the only pussy you can get is called incest so think before u talk/"

rhyme a phrase with itself is generally to be avoided. also, punch half makes sense and is weak. second line.. whatever. whack.

"
You wack and im ill,could only come close to me cause opposites attract/
make yo name compact to 1 N,cause punchlines kill on contact/"

First line very nice, but the second line was a bad personal, the second part doesnt really go with the first. really, the punch in the first line could have been its own bar, made the "whack and im ill " part into its own line and use it as a setup.

"exposin you easily an undetected like i waz stealth/
you got 5 different screen names just to logon and give props to yourself/"

the flow isn't the best, definetely not a great closer... could be worse though. over all, like i said, gotta have less filler. also try for more multis, wordplay and up your vocab a bit.

"You should have left those dusty ryhmes on da shelf
Cuz you say you a hustla, well you jus hustled ya self"

I like it, nice intro, good flow. After this though, your verse goes down hill... that "you do the math" thing is a little too tight to the em line for my taste, the comparison thing you had going early was pretty ok, but it doesnt replace a nice hard punch. the "house" line felt like you were just looking for a "mouse" rhyme cuz it was weak and sort of took the punch out the "mouse" line. also.. your closing was weak... the "think before you talk" flip you did on him was ok but you could have done more with that i tihnk.

v/ looch, tight though.

drop honest votes only on my battles, give good feedback, etc. peace.

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