both did aight but both could of did better but cool white lines ur verse was aight but u needed to elevate u needed better punchlines,metas,wordplay flow,but your stucture was ok..elooch u did a lot better and u could understand it more ...ur punchlines,flow,multies ect. were really better than white line but hey everybody could use a little bit of inprovement even me with that said my vote goes to elooch