Lemme teach ya dog,gonna chalk my first win on tha blackboard//
your styles so played, i rate it as your name...backward//

^Weak Punchline.... Also Weak Opener!!!!!!!!!!!!' .. 2/10

Pop ya spinal column out, kid im poking ur rhymes//
he`s so predictable,my loses were gona be his opening lines

^Alright' Punchline' Weak Closer 6/10

want beef, i stay wit two hands on my nine like a quarter to ten/
tell the site how you said you would suck my dick if i let you win/

^Alright Weak Opener!! Nice Punch 6/10

just read an recite my verses at night before u start sleepin/
better change ya name to"collapse"kid your win beliefs got"caved in".

^Alright Closer!!! Nice Punchline' ... 7/10


Vote: E Looch .. Both Verses .. Could Use Some Serious Work Though

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