http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120529
^^^^^^^^^Vote in this guys.I honestly voted,so you guys do ther same


Lyrical MC-You had nice flow/structure,but I felt your punches were lacking.I hate to say it,but that how I feel.Work on ur punches and u be good.You got the flow going,but u need punches.

IllLunatic-"Why you even try battling? your rhymes make zero sense"
"Its so hard to understand them, you keep readers aggrivated in suspense"
^^this was ur best line.
The other punches were average at best.Ur flow was good,but not as good as Lyrical MC.But u had him in punches section.

Vote-IlLunatic