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Old 04-27-04, 11:28 PM   #3
Mentalz
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Deep shit Cat...The flow was shaky in parts; Mostly in the begining...but you brought it back an' kept with it. Basic Vocab and wordplay, You used alot of the same words over and over...some that stick out: Choice/Chose - It... Try ta' Expand on those areas...Structure was ok, Nice drop over all.

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