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Old 04-30-04, 05:31 PM   #4
Mentalz
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Microsoft Word---> Tools---> Spelling and Grammar Check.

Repeated use of words is annoying.

Quote:
IF YOU CANT RESPECT THE GAME THE GAME AINT GONNA RESPECT YOU//
SPIT AT THE GAME THE GAME WILL SPIT BACK AT YOU//
NIGGA I AINT AHEAD OF YOU IM MILES PASSED YOU//
TREAT YOU LIKE A BLUNT LITE YOU UP AND PASS YOU//


Feel me?

Structure was crazy ugly, work on that a bit for sure. Theme was ok, Flow was ok. Keep it up.

Peace.
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