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Old 05-01-04, 10:56 PM   #15
E Looch
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gkillaz nice structure good flow and good to keep ya lines a the way threw stayed consitent with punchs and everything nice drop see what happens when you dont try an switch up ya style still need to elevate on vocab and creativite

insane not much of anything i liked in your verse structure was off lines was over stretched and punchs never really connected need to elevate on everything playa just keep droppin an makin your shit stay consitetn wit hhard punchs should be your main focus
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