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GKillaz05 5 100.00%
insane16 0 0%
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Old 04-14-04, 04:26 PM   #1
Soul Sickness
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GKillaz05 vs insane16

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10-15 lines
no dr hate or crew
u spit first

good luck .......
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Old 04-14-04, 04:52 PM   #2
GKillaz05
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The only thing 'insane' is that you havnt gave up yet...
But it will clue into your brain soon cuz you battlin a vet...
Wanna make a bet that he gun take a bite off my verse...
Im treatin this kat worse then Eminem did to fred durst...
Im like a can of gasoline... start spittin fire and explode...
You could be grabbin J-Lo's ass and wouldnt blow your load...
This dude is just a sell-out.. jus like his fav rapper ja rule...
You couldnt get a retarded kid to yell out that your COOL...
Im Old Skewl and Insane is Romeo and his hand is Juliet...
This guy started to cry and I havnt even spit hot shit yet...

whatever.... couldnt think of much... holla back
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Old 04-14-04, 07:30 PM   #3
GKillaz05
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UPPIN for insane..
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Old 04-26-04, 09:15 AM   #4
Soul Sickness
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i got two words for u and this rap game- forget-it/
this pussy think he a vet but he jus dont-get-it/
insane numba 1 u can call me the fukin leader/
fukin this pussy to prove he's a bleeder/
bitch soft like butter so now its time to be churned/
lil rookies like u could light me on fire and i still wouldnt get burned/
dont u ever compare that pussy ja rule to me/
i spit-shyt-jit in ya eyes jus so u can see this game is real to me/
ima end it by lettin this fag no he aint a fukin pimp/
twin nines fire at you to leave you wit a whole new gangsta-limp/
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Old 04-29-04, 08:50 AM   #5
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yo sry it took so long to spit i havent been on in a long time but now i spit so im uppin lets get some votes.......................................
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Old 04-29-04, 09:32 AM   #6
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gkilla got this 1...damn.....

breakdown......

gk..
The only thing 'insane' is that you havnt gave up yet...
But it will clue into your brain soon cuz you battlin a vet...
^^^
nice opener....

insane.....
i got two words for u and this rap game- forget-it/
this pussy think he a vet but he jus dont-get-it/
^^^
poor opener...

gk....
This dude is just a sell-out.. jus like his fav rapper ja rule...
You couldnt get a retarded kid to yell out that your COOL...
^^^
sick funny punch.....

Im Old Skewl and Insane is Romeo and his hand is Juliet...
This guy started to cry and I havnt even spit hot shit yet...

^^^
nice finisher...

insane....
dont u ever compare that pussy ja rule to me/
^^
feedin offa verse is wack.....

and ya finisher werent as good as gk'z eitha....

well ya know were my vote is, and u know why.....

im outro....

dont 4get to return the favour.......
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Old 04-29-04, 09:34 AM   #7
GKillaz05
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UPPIN for more votes PEEPS!
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Old 04-29-04, 01:05 PM   #8
GKillaz05
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UPPIN need some more votes people
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Old 04-30-04, 08:28 AM   #9
GKillaz05
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UPPIN for some more votes people......................
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Old 04-30-04, 10:31 AM   #10
GKillaz05
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need some more votes
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Old 04-30-04, 11:04 AM   #11
plustwo
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aight dat bettle was good

breakdown...

gkillaz05: aight i thought this spit was dope...

i liked the opener.. dat was funny

best line: Wanna make a bet that he gun take a bite off my verse...
Im treatin this kat worse then Eminem did to fred durst...

worst line: non i liked dem all

the structure was good and u had some nice punches... overall mark 8/10

insane16...

aight i thought it was pretty good aswell

the opener wasn't very good (couldav bin better)

best line: dont u ever compare that pussy ja rule to me/
i spit-shyt-jit in ya eyes jus so u can see this game is real to me/

worst line:i got two words for u and this rap game- forget-it/
this pussy think he a vet but he jus dont-get-it/


overall i thought that it was good but couldav used better rhymes and you couldav made the structure a bit better... over all mark 7/10



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Old 04-30-04, 11:13 AM   #12
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gkillaz05 vote in my battle now dawg i just voted in yours
 
Old 04-30-04, 01:09 PM   #13
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iight good votes lets keep em comin uppin............................................. ...................................
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Old 04-30-04, 02:20 PM   #14
GKillaz05
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need soe votes... keep em coming people!!!
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Old 05-01-04, 10:56 PM   #15
E Looch
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ok check it

gkillaz nice structure good flow and good to keep ya lines a the way threw stayed consitent with punchs and everything nice drop see what happens when you dont try an switch up ya style still need to elevate on vocab and creativite

insane not much of anything i liked in your verse structure was off lines was over stretched and punchs never really connected need to elevate on everything playa just keep droppin an makin your shit stay consitetn wit hhard punchs should be your main focus
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