both battles need elevation
flow g insane u need 2 work on this usin the same word is wack
vocab tie both need work
opener g insane urs was played and didnt really hit
closer tie wasnt feelin either
g u could work on personals vocab and multis u had a goood flow
insane work on ur vocab personals and multis i liked ur structure
vote g i came 2 personal and gs flow was alot beter along with his punches

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