true ur flow was off a lil but better than ases both could use elevatin though
true also had better structure but again boht could use a lil work though ase ur bars were reeally uneven even them out
vocab true iu had a few big words ase u came basic workon it
punches both were kinda played and could workon creativity but trues hit harder
so my vote goes 2 true with an overall better verse

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