This Is The Rulez
No Crew Votes
No Dick Ridin Votes
No Hatin Votes
We Each Spitt Once
I Spitt First
10-20 Lines
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DQ'ed for biting: http://www.illhill.com/forum/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=6628
-strobe

iight,but damn homie when are u gonna send in your shit??? lol, damn mannnn hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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My flow is developing like a polaroid picture/
my "rhyme book" is the "bible" and i'm just "writing" my "scriptures."

I read you rhymes nigga all you do is talk in riddles//
You a wack eminem so ima gonna call you skittlez//
"A$e", you should stop rhyming because ur shit isn’t worth 2 "cents"//
You could never have a "Refreshing thought", if you ate 2 packs of "mints"//
Its like a school fight, and im the big bad bully while you the "nerd"/
A$e im hiting you so hard that your "cheekbones" fell and made you choke on your "verse" //
The only time you could ever come "Hard" is if you brought a "rock"//
But you’re a fucking "retard", so sit down and start sucking my "cock"//
Im the big playa, I even get hoes over the internet just get them in "chat"//
While the only time you can "Hit pussy", is if you kicked your own "cat"//
A$e Im coming at you faster then a speeding bullet to your head//
Three more shots an you be laying dead on the ground flatter then a bedspread//
I’ma show you how to be good and flex this shit son,//
But I wont worry bout crew votes, no ones stupid enough to let u in one//
Dogg ya style is fake like a thug wit a de-votion to e-motion//
although ya get mad when ya open ya girls door and see-pokin//
Im a scary picture like whats on da Goosebumps cover//
Cuz i'll fuck ya up,cuz ya suck ,then slap you wit a used rubber//

dis nigga talkin bout how he gon shoot me, clamin' he's a thug/
till he gets shot, and da sidewalk soakin' his blood/
da only infected flow he got is da one called yeast/
i'm a x-man n dis rap game, u should call me da "beast"/
when i spit "storms", nigga u can't stand it/
and i'm throwin cards at chu like my name was "gambit"/
i'll slice u like "wolverine" if u fuck wit da team/ (think about the x-men)
and i will "roc" dis fella and make him do da "dip set lean"/ (think about roc-a-fella and the diplomats)
and i ain't never but i caught secondhand/
but i can make secondhand from a gun by bullets going through u n hittin' ya otha men/
since dis nigga named A$e came into RB, ya'll niggaz don't know what to do/
n don't sleep on dis cat cuz he's 0-2/ (o and two)
i'm bout to make dis nigga lose, make a one to his undefeated seven/
and da structure of his flow bout to go down like 9/11/
and nigga i'll be ya waiter for today, cuz nigga, u got served/
i kill ya men, and like da preacher, "u gon be gettin da word."

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My flow is developing like a polaroid picture/
my "rhyme book" is the "bible" and i'm just "writing" my "scriptures."

dude... u and born2spit use the same damn verses...

Its like a school fight, and im the big bad bully while you the "nerd"/
A$e im hiting you so hard that your "cheekbones" fell and made you choke on your "verse" //

born2spit used dat in his battle VS quickpunch...

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

but i said my line first i dont know wuts going on????

yea u did say dem first, just look at the post times, urs is 610 his is like 628

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

i messed up on dis bar:

and i ain't never but i caught secondhand/
but i can make secondhand from a gun by bullets going through u n hittin' ya otha men/

when it really should say....

and i ain't never SMOKE but i caught secondhand/
but i can make secondhand from a gun by bullets going through u n hittin' ya otha men/

but anyway, LET'S GET DA VOTES IN!!!

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My flow is developing like a polaroid picture/
my "rhyme book" is the "bible" and i'm just "writing" my "scriptures."

uppin

cmon ppl vote and plz explain ur vote well cuz i dont want know d/q votes thx!!!!!

I read you rhymes nigga all you do is talk in riddles//
You a wack eminem so ima gonna call you skittlez//
....ok i see the connections between m&m n skittles..but not a good punch

"A$e", you should stop rhyming because ur shit isn’t worth 2 "cents"//
You could never have a "Refreshing thought", if you ate 2 packs of "mints"//
.....this would've been a better punch if u said,stuffed ur mind with mints instead of ate 2 packs of mints

Its like a school fight, and im the big bad bully while you the "nerd"/
A$e im hiting you so hard that your "cheekbones" fell and made you choke on your "verse" //
..why do u have quotes around those words?there are no connections between them........dont just put quotes for the hell of it

The only time you could ever come "Hard" is if you brought a "rock"//
SUCKS
But you’re a fucking "retard", so sit down and start sucking my "cock"//
GAY
Im the big playa, I even get hoes over the internet just get them in "chat"//
While the only time you can "Hit pussy", is if you kicked your own "cat"//
that punch is played as hell
A$e Im coming at you faster then a speeding bullet to your head//
Three more shots an you be laying dead on the ground flatter then a bedspread//
weak
I’ma show you how to be good and flex this shit son,//
But I wont worry bout crew votes, no ones stupid enough to let u in one//
lmfao....the 2nd part of this..bout the crew votes,is the best line in this whole battle...

Dogg ya style is fake like a thug wit a de-votion to e-motion//
although ya get mad when ya open ya girls door and see-pokin//
weak
Im a scary picture like whats on da Goosebumps cover//
Cuz i'll fuck ya up,cuz ya suck ,then slap you wit a used rubber//
wack
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dis nigga talkin bout how he gon shoot me, clamin' he's a thug/
till he gets shot, and da sidewalk soakin' his blood/
....no punch there
da only infected flow he got is da one called yeast/
i'm a x-man n dis rap game, u should call me da "beast"/
.....sayin u're a beast like xman is NOT A PUNCH

when i spit "storms", nigga u can't stand it/
and i'm throwin cards at chu like my name was "gambit"/
........weak
i'll slice u like "wolverine" if u fuck wit da team/ (think about the x-men)
..another xman line? one was too many

and i will "roc" dis fella and make him do da "dip set lean"/ (think about roc-a-fella and the diplomats)
weak wordplay......
and i ain't never but i caught secondhand/
but i can make secondhand from a gun by bullets going through u n hittin' ya otha men/
no comment

since dis nigga named A$e came into RB, ya'll niggaz don't know what to do/
n don't sleep on dis cat cuz he's 0-2/ (o and two)

...ok personal
i'm bout to make dis nigga lose, make a one to his undefeated seven/
and da structure of his flow bout to go down like 9/11/
911 lines are played

and nigga i'll be ya waiter for today, cuz nigga, u got served/
i kill ya men, and like da preacher, "u gon be gettin da word."
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO .....sucked

ok best line in the battle is.....But I wont worry bout crew votes, no ones stupid enough to let u in one//
haha,thats funny shit.......so yea both verses were weak,but that line won me over

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us waiver, waiver, us entry waiver, criminal record travel, denied entry us

Yo Thanks For The Vote Uppin Ppl Cmon Great Battle Dont Sleep

yea ya'll, don't sleep on dis battle for real......

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My flow is developing like a polaroid picture/
my "rhyme book" is the "bible" and i'm just "writing" my "scriptures."

true ur flow was off a lil but better than ases both could use elevatin though
true also had better structure but again boht could use a lil work though ase ur bars were reeally uneven even them out
vocab true iu had a few big words ase u came basic workon it
punches both were kinda played and could workon creativity but trues hit harder
so my vote goes 2 true with an overall better verse

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