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Old 05-05-04, 02:52 PM   #5
G Deuce
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Yo, this was a very easy battle to judge.

Foe Real:
Your rhymes were very shallow and did not make that much since sometimes. You need to work on your flow, and wordplay. Try adding some metaphors in your sentences to create a tight punchline. You seem like the kind who can deliver tongue, twisting blows to your opponent. Just keep trying and elevate.

Physique:
Your flow was very simple and needs to be worked on. Your punchlines were Ok, you just need to practice more with them. You also need to add metaphors to your rhymes. Because your punchlines didn't hit me very hard. Just keep it up though.

v- Physique

Good luck to both of you
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