yo i'll hit first 15 bars max

check it out yo

yo, yo my rhymes stand
like quicksand
i hold u in my hand
i murder u bruttaly with a single command
im so hott, like swat
i quick shot ya soft spot
i burn ya village and totaly pilage
do u think u wont get caught
u spit that shit u know no one else but u can stand
u try to suck dick and still call urself a man
kik back to me homie i wanna see ur rap
i own this shit called spit ur rhyme will truly be no match

im gone post thiz evening
just checkin now to see who had replyed

and check in

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[B]

No rulez but the basic onez

You wanna see my Rap cuz most of the BITERZ cant be CHOOZERZ/(Beggerz)
You stupid Lozer, ill leave more RED on ya Chezt then the Indiana HOOZIERZ/(college/red)
If ya Rhymez Blazin they betta have Sparkz wit Gasoline IGNITERZ/
I dont SEE the Point in ya verse, Maybe the Ghost wuz ya Invisible WRITERZ/(ghost)i hope not lol
You Best believe when i tell you Im {FOE}{REAL} im neva Close to Kindred/
No struckture what so eva you {Startin} to Suck but Ya FLOWZ haz {ENDED}/
I have no Friendz, FOE'z iz alwayz why i keep Bullyin my Enemiez/
He sent me a PM askin (Quote Unquote) do you wanna be Friendz wit Me/
Swallowing Fire will Blaze ya Gutz, and leave you Hangin wit your Saviourz Luck/(Crucafix)
Like Deleted Scenez from DVD'z Thiz guys alwayz endz up wit Major Cutz/

aight uppin

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[B]

Yo, this was a very easy battle to judge.

Foe Real:
Your rhymes were very shallow and did not make that much since sometimes. You need to work on your flow, and wordplay. Try adding some metaphors in your sentences to create a tight punchline. You seem like the kind who can deliver tongue, twisting blows to your opponent. Just keep trying and elevate.

Physique:
Your flow was very simple and needs to be worked on. Your punchlines were Ok, you just need to practice more with them. You also need to add metaphors to your rhymes. Because your punchlines didn't hit me very hard. Just keep it up though.

v- Physique

Good luck to both of you

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Grim

Phisyque- U had a bad flow, but u had some ok punches, bad structure i thought...
i give u an 6/10 Gj

Foe Real- What was dat... That was the most basic and simple shit, anyone could do dat, u need to add voacb, metas and some personals... U need practice.. No offense though dawg, im not tryn to hate

Vote : Phisyque

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da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

foe real,you gotta work on it big time.phisyque,not bad at all but the dvd line was pretty good.i had to chuckle with that one.good shit....

lol damm dis nigga got merked 2 easy

opener-phy...dat shit was hott...foe no words lmaoooo
structure-phy...foe ya shit look nasty
punchlines-phy
multi's-phy...yo its really no explainin dis battle yo...phy ya last line was real creative and was betta than his whole verse...yo foe dunn take soemtime off dis site and step ya game up 4 real

my vote-phy

return dat favor ya'll link in my sig

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

Phisyque ur flow was off a lil but u had ok punches u need to work on pesonals vocab and structure a lil 3/10

Foe Real- Whackness lol u need 2 work on vocab structure punches and personals u had a good fow and thats it 1/10

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