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IP:
Triple N:
Your style's completely wack, its cheesier than cheese nips
Ya rhymes so old they were imported on "slave ships"
-nice opening.. not really good tho
overall u did well.. ight structure and ight flow.. ight punches.. they all average shit..
best line:
Your rhymes are "primates", they haven't evolved, a loss is ya fate
Cuz even if your name was "Tony the Tiger" you still wouldn't be "great"
^^nice wordplay and a lil hard hit punch..
worst line:
Your rhymes wouldn't get high even if they were "randy moss"
This is claiming he "blueprint" so let me construct his "loss"
^^didnt seem to make much sense.. the randy moss part..
Overall:8/10
QuickPunch:
If your art's like your craft at rap, Triple N needs growth
Cause if ur crime like ur rhyme, then kid, u suck at both
-WHOA!!! nice starter.. shit that was nice
ight i gotta give it to ya cuz u had a good flow and hard hittin punches.. ur structure was aight..
best line:
So I’ll fuck your bitch like Ron Goldman, I’ll kill you like OJ
I’ll make you my bitch like buckwheat, say it fucker, “otaaaaay”
^^nice wordplay..and a nice personal
worst line:
This fool is hopeless, he cant See the Picture like Blind Artists
You could Give Webster “Brain” and ur punches still couldnt Define Illness
^^ just a bad punch..
overall:8.5/10
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