ah'ight here the rules
No d/r votes
No crew votes
10-20 lines
30 mins to drop
I'll drop first

Quickpunch DQ'ed and suspended for biting lines from:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...833&postcount=3
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...465&postcount=4

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Ah'ight man check' in, you gotta check in once ya check in I'll start to drop

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ight checking in...good luck..no beef just a fun fair battle...

Your style's completely wack, its cheesier than cheese nips
Ya rhymes so old they were imported on "slave ships"
I'm rip this bitch ass then look around an say who's next
Cuz even if u were "jamie kennedy" you couldn't avoid this "X"
This mothafucka is fake as hell an these things I can't assume
I talked to ya gurl she said "only time u a quickpunch is in the bedroom"
You think you the shit but you will be disillusioned no longer
You should feed ya punches spinach too get stronger
I'm a beat ya ass, they'll think I drew on ya face wit crayola
Cuz of the way I left circles around your eyes darker than "aerioles"(circles around women's nipples)
You know you lost so I won't be mad when you decide to abort
Your rhymes should wear a bra cuz your punches need support
Your rhymes wouldn't get high even if they were "randy moss"
This is claiming he "blueprint" so let me construct his "loss"
Your rhymes are "primates", they haven't evolved, a loss is ya fate
Cuz even if your name was "Tony the Tiger" you still wouldn't be "great"
You couldn't win wit a nifty trick, killed ya 100 ways take ya pick
I hope ya mind works quick, cuz ya punches ain't workin' try "kicks"
Only talent you got is sittin' around playin' wit ya "punch me clown"(dick)
My spits murked ya, now u ain't around cuz in my spits "you drown"

Hold That son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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IGHT GOOD BATTLE...HERES MY SHIT...

If your art's like your craft at rap, Triple N needs growth
Cause if ur crime like ur rhyme, then kid, u suck at both
I'd see a more use for you to sell your soul coz u got nothing in reserve
You're so cheap you could never pay anyone the attention they deserve
So I’ll fuck your bitch like Ron Goldman, I’ll kill you like OJ
I’ll make you my bitch like buckwheat, say it fucker, “otaaaaay”
This fool is hopeless, he cant See the Picture like Blind Artists
You could Give Webster “Brain” and ur punches still couldnt Define Illness
This cat's flow is weak, like Being owned by Memphis ur fate looks real Bleek
This kid could be Santa giving out hot coals and still not Bring Heat
When it comes to guns and lives u know I got mine and a nine
Being a "phone sex operator" is the only way u'd have a "hot line"
don't show up, calm your nerves, so stop pretending you're rowdy
Cuase battles are metaphors for ur sex life both situations are cloudy
U think u can rap? u must be confused as a hermaphrodite trying to masturbate
now i gotta hand u defeat so fast it reminds u of how long it takes u to ejaculate
When I think of TRIPLE N I picture a slow faggot frog-faced homo
Send ur photo to uglypeople.com, they'll probly pay to use it as their logo
this pussy ass internet chatter on the net needs to stop, its ridiculous
this guy turned gay after this battle out of nowhere, nastradomous couldn't have predicted this

yo man drop already time is up man 30 mins remember

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Triple N:
Your style's completely wack, its cheesier than cheese nips
Ya rhymes so old they were imported on "slave ships"
-nice opening.. not really good tho
overall u did well.. ight structure and ight flow.. ight punches.. they all average shit..
best line:
Your rhymes are "primates", they haven't evolved, a loss is ya fate
Cuz even if your name was "Tony the Tiger" you still wouldn't be "great"
^^nice wordplay and a lil hard hit punch..

worst line:
Your rhymes wouldn't get high even if they were "randy moss"
This is claiming he "blueprint" so let me construct his "loss"
^^didnt seem to make much sense.. the randy moss part..

Overall:8/10

QuickPunch:
If your art's like your craft at rap, Triple N needs growth
Cause if ur crime like ur rhyme, then kid, u suck at both
-WHOA!!! nice starter.. shit that was nice
ight i gotta give it to ya cuz u had a good flow and hard hittin punches.. ur structure was aight..
best line:
So I’ll fuck your bitch like Ron Goldman, I’ll kill you like OJ
I’ll make you my bitch like buckwheat, say it fucker, “otaaaaay”
^^nice wordplay..and a nice personal

worst line:
This fool is hopeless, he cant See the Picture like Blind Artists
You could Give Webster “Brain” and ur punches still couldnt Define Illness
^^ just a bad punch..

overall:8.5/10

vote-quickpunch

honest vote.. so dont hate.. return favor guys links are below

Thanks For The Honest Vote...yall Keep Em Coming...and Explain Them Like The Mixx Did...very Nice Way To Explain Votes....thanks

DAt was a good ass battle
but immma give dat 2 Triple-N cause dat was Nifty Neat and NASTY!...lolz jp
Triple-n:
Structure:10
Flow:9
Punches:7

OverAll:26

QuickPunch:
Structure:10
Flow:8
Punches:7

OverAll:25


OverAll A Great battle...but dis 1 just goes Tripple N

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

QP got u he had better rhymes and punches
well his mutis was good but it was a little bit
weak but your flow was perfect and much better
and yo structure is good u got him by saying
ejaculate that was funny your hell but
good rhymes man well done

Your style's completely wack, its cheesier than cheese nips
Ya rhymes so old they were imported on "slave ships"
First Line Got Nuttin To Do With 2nd Line Wack Opener 3\10
I'm rip this bitch ass then look around an say who's next
Cuz even if u were "jamie kennedy" you couldn't avoid this "X"
Pretty Nice 6\10
This mothafucka is fake as hell an these things I can't assume
I talked to ya gurl she said "only time u a quickpunch is in the bedroom"
Nice Personal Only If It Were True 8\10
You think you the shit but you will be disillusioned no longer
You should feed ya punches spinach too get stronger
HAHA Nice Pop-eye Line Yo......7\10
I'm a beat ya ass, they'll think I drew on ya face wit crayola
Cuz of the way I left circles around your eyes darker than "aerioles"(circles around women's nipples)Not Feelin It 4\10
You know you lost so I won't be mad when you decide to abort
Your rhymes should wear a bra cuz your punches need support
:O nice nice nice man 9\10
Your rhymes wouldn't get high even if they were "randy moss"
This is claiming he "blueprint" so let me construct his "loss"
HUH ? 5\10
Your rhymes are "primates", they haven't evolved, a loss is ya fate
Cuz even if your name was "Tony the Tiger" you still wouldn't be "great"
Nice Syllables 7\10
You couldn't win wit a nifty trick, killed ya 100 ways take ya pick
I hope ya mind works quick, cuz ya punches ain't workin' try "kicks"
Only talent you got is sittin' around playin' wit ya "punch me clown"(dick)
My spits murked ya, now u ain't around cuz in my spits "you drown"
last four lines pretty good 8\10
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If your art's like your craft at rap, Triple N needs growth
Cause if ur crime like ur rhyme, then kid, u suck at both
Wack Opener 3\10
I'd see a more use for you to sell your soul coz u got nothing in reserve
You're so cheap you could never pay anyone the attention they deserve
Not A Diss ?? 5\10
So I’ll fuck your bitch like Ron Goldman, I’ll kill you like OJ
I’ll make you my bitch like buckwheat, say it fucker, “otaaaaay”
Nice Line 7\10
This fool is hopeless, he cant See the Picture like Blind Artists
You could Give Webster “Brain” and ur punches still couldnt Define Illness
:0 thats nice 10\10
This cat's flow is weak, like Being owned by Memphis ur fate looks real Bleek
This kid could be Santa giving out hot coals and still not Bring Heat
7\10
When it comes to guns and lives u know I got mine and a nine
Being a "phone sex operator" is the only way u'd have a "hot line"
OOOOOOOOOOo Dissed Like WHOA 9\10
don't show up, calm your nerves, so stop pretending you're rowdy
Cuase battles are metaphors for ur sex life both situations are cloudy
HAHAHA ROFL 8\10
U think u can rap? u must be confused as a hermaphrodite trying to masturbate
now i gotta hand u defeat so fast it reminds u of how long it takes u to ejaculate
Pretty Good Not IlL 7\10
When I think of TRIPLE N I picture a slow faggot frog-faced homo
Send ur photo to uglypeople.com, they'll probly pay to use it as their logo
.......................HAAAAAAAAAAAAA..........8\1 0
this pussy ass internet chatter on the net needs to stop, its ridiculous
this guy turned gay after this battle out of nowhere, nastradomous couldn't have predicted this
Nice Finish 9\10

As U Can See Quock Got More Punches And Used Them Effectively

VOTE - QUICKPUNCH

thanks for the honest votes peeps...keep em coming....nice drop trip n......and explain em votes..

This was a great battle nigga((~~* CLAP IT UP , CLAP IT UP,*~~))

Triple_N

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10
29/40

Quick PUNCH

Flow 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Sructure 8/10
Punches 8/10
33/40

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Free Agent

ight thanks again...keep em coming....very nice battle tho...i thought trip would have won