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Old 05-07-04, 12:39 AM   #11
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From: Unda Ya Bed With An M16
IP:

Your style's completely wack, its cheesier than cheese nips
Ya rhymes so old they were imported on "slave ships"
First Line Got Nuttin To Do With 2nd Line Wack Opener 3\10
I'm rip this bitch ass then look around an say who's next
Cuz even if u were "jamie kennedy" you couldn't avoid this "X"
Pretty Nice 6\10
This mothafucka is fake as hell an these things I can't assume
I talked to ya gurl she said "only time u a quickpunch is in the bedroom"
Nice Personal Only If It Were True 8\10
You think you the shit but you will be disillusioned no longer
You should feed ya punches spinach too get stronger
HAHA Nice Pop-eye Line Yo......7\10
I'm a beat ya ass, they'll think I drew on ya face wit crayola
Cuz of the way I left circles around your eyes darker than "aerioles"(circles around women's nipples)Not Feelin It 4\10
You know you lost so I won't be mad when you decide to abort
Your rhymes should wear a bra cuz your punches need support
:O nice nice nice man 9\10
Your rhymes wouldn't get high even if they were "randy moss"
This is claiming he "blueprint" so let me construct his "loss"
HUH ? 5\10
Your rhymes are "primates", they haven't evolved, a loss is ya fate
Cuz even if your name was "Tony the Tiger" you still wouldn't be "great"
Nice Syllables 7\10
You couldn't win wit a nifty trick, killed ya 100 ways take ya pick
I hope ya mind works quick, cuz ya punches ain't workin' try "kicks"
Only talent you got is sittin' around playin' wit ya "punch me clown"(dick)
My spits murked ya, now u ain't around cuz in my spits "you drown"
last four lines pretty good 8\10
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If your art's like your craft at rap, Triple N needs growth
Cause if ur crime like ur rhyme, then kid, u suck at both
Wack Opener 3\10
I'd see a more use for you to sell your soul coz u got nothing in reserve
You're so cheap you could never pay anyone the attention they deserve
Not A Diss ?? 5\10
So I’ll fuck your bitch like Ron Goldman, I’ll kill you like OJ
I’ll make you my bitch like buckwheat, say it fucker, “otaaaaay”
Nice Line 7\10
This fool is hopeless, he cant See the Picture like Blind Artists
You could Give Webster “Brain” and ur punches still couldnt Define Illness
:0 thats nice 10\10
This cat's flow is weak, like Being owned by Memphis ur fate looks real Bleek
This kid could be Santa giving out hot coals and still not Bring Heat
7\10
When it comes to guns and lives u know I got mine and a nine
Being a "phone sex operator" is the only way u'd have a "hot line"
OOOOOOOOOOo Dissed Like WHOA 9\10
don't show up, calm your nerves, so stop pretending you're rowdy
Cuase battles are metaphors for ur sex life both situations are cloudy
HAHAHA ROFL 8\10
U think u can rap? u must be confused as a hermaphrodite trying to masturbate
now i gotta hand u defeat so fast it reminds u of how long it takes u to ejaculate
Pretty Good Not IlL 7\10
When I think of TRIPLE N I picture a slow faggot frog-faced homo
Send ur photo to uglypeople.com, they'll probly pay to use it as their logo
.......................HAAAAAAAAAAAAA..........8\1 0
this pussy ass internet chatter on the net needs to stop, its ridiculous
this guy turned gay after this battle out of nowhere, nastradomous couldn't have predicted this
Nice Finish 9\10

As U Can See Quock Got More Punches And Used Them Effectively

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