*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
From: Baton Rouge,LOUISIANA |
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alright pa u need better structure...it looks like a paragraph..ur rhymes would be more clear if u had better structure...u had some good rhymes u really did..but with structure..better word play and some good multies...It'd be hot...and up ur vocab..pa *uno*
SB
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