J it looked like u did a little too much studying man. Shit wasnt personal it was about a dude whose been dead hundreds of years, and the shit that wasnt almost didnt make any sense. Structure was alright but ya lines got too long toward the end. Da vinci i liked ya shit man. Hit hard and flow was tight. It wasnt the best but J needs to practice a little more. Da vinci gets my vote

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