breakdown for enygma:

flow:good threw the whole peice no off spots 7/10

volcab:nice use for the topic it worked well 7/10

story:not too good here i don't think you painted a good picture of cartoon life used lots of imagery and shit but the story didn't really go anyway there was no real twists or anything 6/10

overall:20/30 good verse espeicially for your first topical

breakdown for kryogenix:

flow:it was working i thought 7/10

volcab:kinda basic nothing great here 6/10

story:same problems as enygma i didn't see the story going anyway you did an alright job describing the world around you though not quite as well as enygma did 6/10

overall:19/30

vote--close battle i thought in the end enygma gets my vote though

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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