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Old 05-12-04, 01:55 PM   #10
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STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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aight umm both of u came type week but dis was aight battle

opener-ar...mc da way u made ya shit ryhme was good but da concept was weak
structure-ar
punchlines-a tie
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-nun
enjoyed-ar...even tho his verse was basic at least he tried da be creative nahmean and mc u started out okay then u got weak both of ya'll need da step up tho

my vote-ar
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