Forget this dread-lock//I got his neck-up in a dead-lock///
This is alright. but sux as an opener
I squeeze a bit harder and now his head's off///
He must be born without a spine// Yep, he's that soft///
It's like holding guns in Columbine// And now I let off///
WEAK ASSED PUNCH
Wanna-be Bob Marley// HE's Jamaican// YOU're just fakin'///
I play "Planet Rock"// Shatter your bones to see you "breakin"///
Eh this was weak
You no "Crazy Legs"// You lazy fag// Better face the facts///
It's more of a suicide attempt when you try to attack//
Hell yeah, you're that wack!///
Yuck, mostly filler
I get you sentenced for every wack sentence in this court///
Couldn't believe my eyes: Vanilla Ice is a member of my Forum-Board///
Bad closer


Before I even get started here's something I predict -
This battle's one-sided like a mobius strip.
Hella good opener
I read your verse, I don't even have to feed, it's a mess
You spit so generic you should be reppin' Payless.
Ha ha good punch
You like "Damn...why these people sleeping on these skills of mine?"
Dude, it's your skills that are asleep - you spit one too many tired punchlines
aiight punch
Mc murder? Nah, MC-all-my-shit-is-recycled is a better fit
You could have Barrry Bonds in your crew and still never have a hit
Mediocre punch
You could rap for years and years, you still be stuck in obscurity
The only battlerap newbie collecting social security
Nice punch
Don't let that happen dude, take advice from someone you admire
after you lose this battle call it quits son - retire.
ok closer

aiight the lowdown-
Mc Murder-4.5/10
ares-8/10

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