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atlas the vagabond
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IP:
thanks for comin out to the both of you, good fight good fight. but here's the verdict.
JSmoothe-nice personal at the beginning, good way to start off a verse is with a play off the name personal. Kept me listening, especially how the first line connects itself with the next. "Stop drop and roll quick...." and then it mentioning the burning feeling of hemorroids, that's nice. decent flow, not bad not excellent, not flawed. It was a decent battle verse and i can tell that you thought that, "Hey, this guy doesn't have much on me, so i don't need to bring ether on him to beat him."
or did you?
premanition-(nice name by the way) i like the swagger you came with. "Only 4 barz to merk this kid." I was like, aight aight, let's see it. And that's what's great, is to begin with a swagger that makes people want to listen, and wait in anticipation for illness. Your verse in itself came off the same as your opponents did, "I don't need to spit that hard to beat this dude." The problem herein is that you left me dissatisfied for all the attention i was about to pay your verse. The combination of what i beleive to be an ill name, and as well as a no-pressure aura about yourself, gave me high hopes. Perhaps higher than they should've been. you came in kind of weak, i have to admit. but this line i like, "u playin scrabble wiv ya gram n sayin that you got wordplay..."
that's hot. and the way you ended it was quite nice, props on that.
ya mums a slut...preganant weekly n neva takes precautions...
n all that crack means ya brothers n sisters all av natural abortions....
a good ender definately made up for the beginning let down.
however i think that overall, Jsmooth got over you. He had more illness and content in his verse than you did. But overall it was a decent exhibition and i'd like to see more from you guys.
vote=jsmooth
please vote honestly on the battle in my sig, i'd appreciate it.
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