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Old 05-13-04, 09:13 PM   #9
HELLonEARTH
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Quikhit
hale d man thats so wack sound like u just another guy tryin to be black but here come quikhit on the attack im like the d linemen comin for the sack man an tell ur mom she got a nice ass rack
Nice flow and multis, but no punch
im bout to make u feel my flows like luda im bout to start throwin them bows man im the king and that everyone knows
Nice, but still no punches
man ill come to ur house and rape ya wife man im come to ur house and fuck up ur life
Nice, still no punch dammit
im the king and thats how itll always be man im going to win that erry1 can see
Aiight you got a fucked closer and NO FUKIN PUNCHES


Hale-D
it don't matter what race you say whether you lez, black, white or gay
if you got tha talent you can win tha fame
i dunno bout the fucked up lines YOU say
ok opener
ima send u to primary u neva passed
o thats right, bitch smoked to much grass
weak but at least its a punch
your wacked lines... are way to cracked
writin bout sex in ure life you lacked
WEAK
i think your to "quik" for me cause whatever you spit wouldn't make the leap
even if immaculate beats a rissen you wouldn't be
because real emcees don't spend 10 dolla you cheap
Eck man what the fuck
your lyrics to this game you couldn't make them
your sentences run on you should chase em
First mediocre punch
so fuck wat you say, i'ma leave mah name
Hale-D n' the crew, watch wat you say...
Mediocre closer

Quick hits-3/10
HaleD-5/10

Fuck ya'll need personals but ya'll got the multis down. Quik needs to swing every once in a while. ELEVATE LIKE FUCK!

vote-Hale D
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