u go first
no hate votes
no crew votes
10-15 lines

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Hale-D movin to tha top...

hale d man thats so wack sound like u just another guy tryin to be black but here come quikhit on the attack im like the d linemen comin for the sack man an tell ur mom she got a nice ass rack im bout to make u feel my flows like luda im bout to start throwin them bows man im the king and that everyone knows man ill come to ur house and rape ya wife man im come to ur house and fuck up ur life im the king and thats how itll always be man im going to win that erry1 can see

it don't matter what race you say whether you lez, black, white or gay
if you got tha talent you can win tha fame
i dunno bout the fucked up lines YOU say
ima send u to primary u neva passed
o thats right, bitch smoked to much grass
your wacked lines... are way to cracked
writin bout sex in ure life you lacked
i think your to "quik" for me cause whatever you spit wouldn't make the leap
even if immaculate beats a rissen you wouldn't be
because real emcees don't spend 10 dolla you cheap
your lyrics to this game you couldn't make them
your sentences run on you should chase em
so fuck wat you say, i'ma leave mah name
Hale-D n' the crew, watch wat you say...

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Hale-D movin to tha top...

need some votes playas come on now playas show some luv

come on plez........... need some votes here playas

Comon boyz! Votez plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. PeAcE.

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Hale-D movin to tha top...

Niiice Battle, pretty good rhymes on both sides, but I think this one goes to Hale-D, he had better flow, better Vocab, and just better style man, Keep this shit up!!!

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yep yep dis go to hale D becuz he had good flowz and nice vocab

but work on yo fuckin pucnhes its lackin on both sides yo

vote=hale-D

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

Quikhit
hale d man thats so wack sound like u just another guy tryin to be black but here come quikhit on the attack im like the d linemen comin for the sack man an tell ur mom she got a nice ass rack
Nice flow and multis, but no punch
im bout to make u feel my flows like luda im bout to start throwin them bows man im the king and that everyone knows
Nice, but still no punches
man ill come to ur house and rape ya wife man im come to ur house and fuck up ur life
Nice, still no punch dammit
im the king and thats how itll always be man im going to win that erry1 can see
Aiight you got a fucked closer and NO FUKIN PUNCHES


Hale-D
it don't matter what race you say whether you lez, black, white or gay
if you got tha talent you can win tha fame
i dunno bout the fucked up lines YOU say
ok opener
ima send u to primary u neva passed
o thats right, bitch smoked to much grass
weak but at least its a punch
your wacked lines... are way to cracked
writin bout sex in ure life you lacked
WEAK
i think your to "quik" for me cause whatever you spit wouldn't make the leap
even if immaculate beats a rissen you wouldn't be
because real emcees don't spend 10 dolla you cheap
Eck man what the fuck
your lyrics to this game you couldn't make them
your sentences run on you should chase em
First mediocre punch
so fuck wat you say, i'ma leave mah name
Hale-D n' the crew, watch wat you say...
Mediocre closer

Quick hits-3/10
HaleD-5/10

Fuck ya'll need personals but ya'll got the multis down. Quik needs to swing every once in a while. ELEVATE LIKE FUCK!

vote-Hale D

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I've Been Gone Longer Than You Been Writing

it don't matter what race you say whether you lez, black, white or gay
-Nice opener, Hale D has this battle in virtually every dimesion possible. quick Hit you need to go to a bar sturcture to ad emphasis on your punches, as well you need to develop your punches more. Hale D gets my vote cause he didn't have long wordy played out punches that sound like nursery rhymes.

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yo im goin with quickhit he at least had some good shit flowing and some punches Hale-D- u did good but i gotta go wit quikhit on this

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WhItE CrAcA

Looking for a crew to join hit me up pm me and ill respond back

yea u might look tough but in the end this shit
is mine u can intimidate but still have the same fate, losin to me - White Craca

aight well this battle was pretty good I have to give a big up to both
of you but I would have to say Hale-D took this with better stuff in every
category & I couldn't read Quikhit's well enough

so vote goes to.......Hale-D

drop a honest vote on this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126013

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nice battle but hale d took diz one

Punches-Hale
Flow-Same
Complexity-Hale

Vote Hale D


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Hale D = 34/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10
Humor 7/10

Quikhit = 29/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 5/10

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