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Originally Posted by E Looch
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spul your opener was pretty nice good set up line helped out the punch good opener your closer wass a nice personal but better things for l.i though lol good wording in it to and the rest of your verse had a bunch of personals the aim lingo was pretty soft punch the treason line was sick lmao damn overall i was fealin about half your verse brah tight verse the aim shit is what was your downfall
l.i your opener was nice good wordplay and punch and a concept not used much your closer was nice to good way to point that out that he uses that style way to much and the rest of your verse was nicely worded not so much used concepts and good personals good job of putti nthe convo part in it instead of just sayin the verse nobody would have got it tight verse as well but you get my vote for being more consitent with your personals and punchs i felt
tight battle sons this is why people should battle on there own level shit is actually worth readin and keeps attention
vote l.i no hate either even after i read that aim convo lol
Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. No Crew Votes
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what the fuck spul he is`nt in our crew get the vote back?
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